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docs: rewrite all chapters in the Geewax house voice - #17
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Apply the approved writing voice across all 13 chapters: J.J. Geewax example-first teaching structure on Kubernetes-Patterns-grade vocabulary. - Lead each concept with a concrete thing in the project (a service, endpoint, method, command) before naming the abstraction. - Add a before/after code pair in ch03 place_order (naive write-then-check vs. the real check-stock -> persist -> publish order) with #A/#B/#C callouts, built from the actual handler. - Zero em-dashes (recast with commas, colons, semicolons, parentheses, or new sentences; figure-caption dashes become colons). - No rule-of-three cadence, no filler or meta-sentences, no stacked intensifiers. Contractions, varied sentence length, natural transitions. - House spine kept (Learning objectives / Why this matters / For deeper coverage). All code, commands, figures, output, and identifiers preserved. Verified: 0 em-dashes, 0 ban-tier (lgtm-professional-voice), forbidden-syntax / cross-references / liquid-collisions clean, jekyll build green.
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Applies the approved writing voice across all 13 chapters: Geewax example-first teaching structure on Kubernetes-Patterns vocabulary. Concept leads with a concrete thing in the project before the abstraction; ch03 gets a before/after place_order code pair (#A/#B/#C). Zero em-dashes, no rule-of-three, no filler/meta/intensifiers; contractions, varied cadence, natural transitions. House spine kept; all code/commands/figures/output/identifiers preserved. Verified: 0 em-dashes, 0 ban-tier, guards + jekyll build clean.